When the whole crowd is circulating such that soon everyone is covered in blood, and I call for him
Fearful Frank! Fearful Frank!
No one turns for me.
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When the whole crowd is circulating such that soon everyone is covered in blood, and I call for him
Fearful Frank! Fearful Frank!
No one turns for me.
2 responses so far ↓
1 mackenzie // Jul 25, 2008 at 5:04 pm
I like how terse this is, I read it as talking about a concert and I think it captures the scene real well. The only two things I’d say is maybe give me more, and maybe don’t capitalize “No.” I’m interested so why not keep going?
2 worsty // Jul 26, 2008 at 3:20 pm
hmmm… i suppose there are shows where one might find blood, but that wasnt what i was thinkin of…
why not keep going… hm, but WHY keep going? this is all this needs to my own very own mind. i am into brevity methinks. maybe nexty one’ll be longer.
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